tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5741793327303923992.post2038300657463384663..comments2023-04-04T04:28:56.406-05:00Comments on Our Story ♥: I need your helpKelleehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18375802334017681242noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5741793327303923992.post-54138234563047356922009-05-01T14:06:00.000-05:002009-05-01T14:06:00.000-05:00Don't forget about frequent hospitalizations and o...Don't forget about frequent hospitalizations and our increased risk of dehydration due to salt loss. Also, maybe you should point out that the diabetes is not your typical Type 1 or Type 2 but a unique combination directly related to CF. I agree with Ronnie about correcting the spelling/grammar. Otherwise I liked it.Kevinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08893643651586704277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5741793327303923992.post-26377392331009834332009-04-30T23:37:00.000-05:002009-04-30T23:37:00.000-05:00It's very raw. I think explaining CF through diffe...It's very raw. I think explaining CF through different eyes is a very good way to increase awareness. I would go back over it though and correct the grammatical and spelling errors as they can distract the reader from your ultimate message.<br /><br />RonnieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06849674714471543078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5741793327303923992.post-3600164361321687462009-04-30T22:23:00.000-05:002009-04-30T22:23:00.000-05:00I think you did an awesome job!! You told the trut...I think you did an awesome job!! You told the truth...didn't hide anything!! You told the "true" side of CF. Perfect in my opinion. Can't wait to read part 2.Kateyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11628086713110351792noreply@blogger.com